she's out of my life, because of GAME

She's out of my life, because of game.
She's out of my life, because of so many my mistakes.
She's out of my life, because of my psychokinesis、my illness, and my job.

i never thought she's so fragile, i never realized that i paid so little time on her.
she so loved me before, but now, everything has gone. games take me so many time and energy、and my body.

she got married 08-Jan., even not tell me. And since 07-Dec. she hadn't answer my call any more, i know she'd go since then.

i'm doing wrong, i shouldn't buy tv-consoles, and i should pay more time and love on her. Now words worth nothing, i only hope that ：
she'll be beatific from now on.



（注：用外文本意就不希望所有人都看，只想表达一下心中的想法。只想招志同道合、有过同样经历或看法的人共谈。请喜好捣乱/无共同心境的人勿入、勿回，谢谢）

[本帖最后由 5945jq 于 2008-5-6 15:14 编辑]

英文进修贴

你们真残忍啊，也不安慰安慰楼主

玩女人玩游戏都是玩，人生苦短，开心就好

记得教训就好，玩是玩，不要生命里只有游戏啊～

why blaming video games while nobody forced you to pick up the joystick in the first place?

or are you too smart to realize a drunk doesn't always know he's drunk?

you can't lose if you don't play, pal.

nice 'English' guys.:D

楼上几位，叫你写你也未必写得出来呢

2 steps to do
first, get a new girlfriend
2nd,give all ur console to me

i used to treat with game and emotion very carefully.
unfortunatelly, one day, i lost my job (for her) and my health, because of my body i don't get any job till now, for that i lost myself and all gave vent to game (including interrelated magazines & PC).
In other words, body changed my life, life&job caused my backslide, backslide made me gave vent to game, and then, she can't bear my inhospitality and life with just a little money. Without game maybe i would show more attention on her(no other to play), u should know that i used to be a good boy since knowing fuxx game.

[本帖最后由 5945jq 于 2008-5-6 04:32 编辑]

sherlockboy，麦香鸡翅，有些人喜欢取闹又说不出个所以然，不理他们就好。
i'm just wanna express my thought.

不好意思，请改正一下错误。

..太多了，拿一句来举个例子。
she so loved me before, but now, everything has gone. games take me so many time and energy、and my body.
'she so loved me' 没这么说的。。=>she loved me alot/she really loved me etc.
'everything has gone' 你要表达的是 'everything is gone'.
'games' 你要表达的是游戏为一个主体，如果+s就更显得是一些游戏,所以=>'game"
'take' 要换成'took/has taken'...还要+away..你要表达的是精力把。。energy更指物理那类的。。
'my body'..你对游戏失身了么？and不要+这么多。。
=>'game took away so many time,vigor and my health from me'
今天真蛋痛了。。

呵呵，我本来说的是改正一下你自己那几句话里的错误。。随便说一句吧，你的后两个meant是之后才改的吧。
so loved me用法少，但有。
我要表达的就是has gone，这种说法是没错的。
game做复数时我表达的是各种各样以及TV/PC以及数量庞大的software。做单数表达的是总一类。
take可以直接指“带走”，而且我用现在时是因为直到现在我还是这样。指的就是物理。
body指身体状况。
"take sb. sth"是一种固定用法，可不加from。

句中有错误或与各国口语有异很正常，欢迎指出，有些用法是电影里的口语说法，如so loved me，也有很多句式和中文一样有多种用法，很多外语学习者在学习过程中都会误以为只有自己见过的知道的用法才是唯一的、正确的。还有必须告诉你和某几人的是真正的高手不是喜欢贬他人炫自己，而是指以纰漏，有错大家也可以讨论，毕竟大2过级后转学日语就很少触碰英语了，仅大三时做过短时间口语翻译，所以很多东西现在也不是记那么清了。这帖只是为了写下心情，没有别的意思。如你所言为让更多人看懂尽量用了常见词汇语法。

最后加一句，再次真心希望这帖不要变成英语讨论帖。

[本帖最后由 5945jq 于 2008-5-6 05:46 编辑]

Hi boys, I totally understand that sometime it's easier(or at least feel better) to express yourself in English, BUT, you should also try to use the English way of thinking, not just writing.

Anyway, ppl always go through a lot of misery and hardship sometime, but your way was not positive enough, and it's not even a way of abreaction. Because apparently, you didn't feel happier, did you?

Well, still so damn easy to say it, but i believe that ppl are always tgfc.qwd1.comed up by themselves. Again, don't blame the fu*king game, pls, your attitude instead.

I understand u because I'm having some personal problem as well...

[本帖最后由 jiayang0103 于 2008-5-6 05:54 编辑]

但是现在不开心。。我从一开始就根本没把感情当玩，也万万没想到付出感情比我还多的她，竟会选择离开。我太大意了，我太放纵我自己，我太信任她对我的感情，以至于事情发生了仍不敢信这是真的。
现在只能每天夜里一个人在被里思索那逝去的一点一滴、那温软的手、那撒娇和生气的表情、那再也看不到的微笑。
从前的我，真的不是这样。。

还是中文表达的意境准确啊

算了算了，您说我英文有错您的没错就那样把。。

[本帖最后由 Providence 于 2008-5-6 06:23 编辑]

你要是不能搞明白It is NOT because of GAME.
你下一个女友还得飞。

"ppl are always tgfc.qwd1.comed up"interesting
what mean does "pls(plus?please?), your attitude instead(instead what? my way?)"？
so many slang
thx for your words, also wish u have a lucky&corret future. She's still with u,isn't she? Don't make her sad.

那么晚了漏打了个t,之后马上补上了，你就当我错了你没错把。。
大哥我承认你英文nb，比我nb多了。饶了我把。。
tg大婶太多了。。

[本帖最后由 Providence 于 2008-5-6 06:50 编辑]

yeah, pls for please, and instead of blaming the game, well, kinda your way as well.

just remember this:
If God throw you a lemon, just try to make a lemonade. Good luck.

不想讨论和E有关的学术问题了。
你说的也很对，大婶很多，总有人喜欢随时贬下他人而说些跟主题完全没有关系的话。
你要真想讨论先回去问下老师是否有你的'is gone'这种用法再说吧。讨论这些真的很没意思。如果你回这些无用的帖子是想让别人觉得你E好，那这里不是地方，你应该去专门的E文角论坛，我们承认也没用。好吧你E文很好。

[本帖最后由 5945jq 于 2008-5-6 07:03 编辑]

Can't help myself…
like you said: easy to say it.

你们英语真好

E文交流贴转型?

水区开个外文交流贴吧...

调整好心态，好好对下一个人吧。

life is short,play more.

sun,kan bu dong

谁来个日文版的

“She's gone.”就搞定了，打那么多- -

好像从第一页就又跑题了。。。。tg风格啊

问题不是游戏，而是你关心不够，你对感情的不珍惜

不完全是。。你看我前面的回帖。。
不珍惜，我承认，我犯了大错。我过于信赖感情，这样的结局是完全/根本没有想到的。。累了，伤了。暂时不想再被伤了。一次就够了。

[本帖最后由 5945jq 于 2008-5-6 12:17 编辑]

again say after sun？

She so love me,没错

i so fukin hate XXXX大学常用语，XXX一般指某老师。

[本帖最后由 麦香鸡翅 于 2008-5-6 12:19 编辑]

LZ缺乏的是责任心，有事首先想到的是because of Game ，而没有去想自身的问题。不合适的东西出现在不合适的人面前，本身就是一种推卸责任的想法。在你成熟起来之前，类似事件再发生多次的几率高得很，无论是感情还是工作。

很同意~~看完标题就想说这个~~翻两页看到这个了~~唔~~并不是说因为这个世界上有游戏她才离你而去的~~~

还有你所说的过于信任感情~~我看不出来~~凭什么啊~~？就因为你不求付出的态度`~~~？

oh,what is the facking shlt

中国人写的英语, 看都懒得看
中国人说的英语, 听都懒得听.

的确，给gamespot改错的first person shooting大神的英文是最好的

gone不光可以做形容词，而且表语、定语通杀。

这贴太233了
lz的英语一看就知道是中国人写的:D

中国人已经不能用汉语表达感情了吗....

我前面说了，是的确是不懂很多事情。
发这篇帖也没说完全归咎于游戏，肯定我自身的原因是主要的。但正好在那个为难的前一阵我购入了CONSOLES（几台），而后就发生了种种人生的大变故（具体不想谈了）本来变故前我还没那么GAMER发生那一系列事后看到了手边的GAME。。
我说信任感情，是因我本是被动接收者，认为一切都把握在手中，天真地以为这样的情感永远不会从手中溜走。但没想到一些堕落期对某人的忽视竟造成这样的结果。。

these english made me upsetting

lz为什么用英文？俺学问低看不懂啊